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Crystal Dennis's avatar

I really like this setup. I'm a sucker for engaging characters, and I'm excited to see what happens as the story unfolds for these guys.

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Coral Evermore's avatar

I enjoyed reading this! It was very atmosphere and kept me intrigued throughout. The only few things I would point out is that at times it was confusing which nicknames were for who “pale-gaze” “gray-head” etc and a few typos here and there. The world building was done subtly enough without info dumping. Definitely reminded me of Dungeons and Dragons, in a good way. Left the reader wanting to know more and finished off on a solid cliffhanger! Good job :)

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